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Now that the mirror has broken
into a thousand shards of
your careless secrets and
your constant flow of lies,

you’ve come undone.

And you have nothing,
no one to smile and say they understand
while you hide behind
your nervous laughter and
your constant effort
to make things seem alright.

You’re never broken,
but you make everyone else
fall apart
and fall away from the very things that
keep a family together.

You live only on impressions,
where the world is happy so long
as smiles and laughter echo through
a war-torn household,
because you’d never think that
children could sense the weight of
icy conversation.

You ignore the wordless screams that
are written plainly across the faces of
your empty bed and stony meals
and sudden hiatus from the true laughter
that occasionally finds itself breathing.

You’ve truly come undone,

but you’ll never even notice
the mirror’s broken.
©2005-2009 ~recklesslyforgotten
:iconrecklesslyforgotten:

Author's Comments

This was supposed to be a final poetry project for my U English class, however it spiralled into every emotion that's been building inside me over these past few days.

Comments and criticism would be more than appreciated, as always.

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:iconbridgetthegamer:
...Wow...I'm just...I'd like to say more but I'm...speechless...

--
If there's an RPG not yet played,
I'll be there!
If there's a comic book not yet read,
I'll be there!
If there are brownies not yet eaten,
...I'll be there a hell of a lot quicker!
:iconrecklesslyforgotten:
And is that a good or bad silence? Heh.

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"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness; but still will keep a bower quiet for us, and a sleep full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing."
- Keats, 'Endymion'.
:iconpiro-kun:
I think it's a good silence...coz it's one of your deeper feeling ones.

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n.n
:iconrecklesslyforgotten:
:) Thank you.

--
"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness; but still will keep a bower quiet for us, and a sleep full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing."
- Keats, 'Endymion'.
:iconattittude:
love it....:love:

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can yu kill me once again...???

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:iconrecklesslyforgotten:
Thank you. :hug:

--
"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness; but still will keep a bower quiet for us, and a sleep full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing."
- Keats, 'Endymion'.
:iconborn2darkness:
i like this a lot....







i agree with u..u know..appearances are deceptive...many people today are more insecure than they seem to be.:)
good work...
:iconrecklesslyforgotten:
Thank you very much. :hug:

--
"A thing of beauty is a joy for ever: its loveliness increases; it will never pass into nothingness; but still will keep a bower quiet for us, and a sleep full of sweet dreams, and health, and quiet breathing."
- Keats, 'Endymion'.
:iconmimimarquez:
Wow this is soooo powerful. I like it soooooooo much. Do u fink i like d word soooooooo?? Lol! It's good!

--
What's the point in living,
If we're all gonna die?

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